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Bubbles screamed as Yuuka slashed at her chest, drawing blood. "OW! That hurt!"

"It's supposed to, you heartless fool." Yuuka snarled. "And now, you're going to suffer even more!" She pulled out her umbrella and began to bash Bubbles in the head violently.

"Stop it!" Bubbles summoned a blast of bubbles and sent it towards Yuuka, pushing her away. The flower youkai grit her teeth and began to conjure up a Master Spark.

"It's time to die, brat." With that, a beam of pure, unrivaled power flew from her umbrella and went right through Bubbles, killing her.

Meanwhile, Chris noticed a bright light where Bubbles was. "I found you, Yuuka." He dashed towards her location, a lusty smile on his face. "You're going to be my wife and ruler of my fair city."

Yuuka turned away from the smoking remains of Bubbles and walked towards Rosechu, kneeling towards her and lifted her up. "I'm sorry. You were only trying to help me. You didn't deserve this." She then put her body onto a nearby bench and shed a single tear.

Suddenly, a loud noise could be heard. "WHO DID THIS?! WHO DID THIS TO BUBBLES?! I DEMAND AN ANSWER!" Yuuka frowned. He was finally here. It was about damn time.

"YOU GODDAMN TROLLS! YOU-" Chris didn't even have a chance to speak before Yuuka jump-kicked him in the chest, sending him to the ground. "Shut up, you stupid fucking moron."

Yuuka glared down at him as she placed a foot onto his neck. "Oh, what am I going to do to you." She sneered down at the ugly abomination that called itself the mayor of CWCville.

"My love-"

CRACK!

Yuuka sneered as she looked at her blood covered foot. "I don't remember you telling you to speak, worm." She then pulled out a card and began to chant. "Wood Sign, Vine Breaker!"
Vines burst from the card and wrapped themselves around Chris, crushing him. "Before you die, do you have any last words?" Yuuka asked him.

"Sonichu…"

"I didn't think so."

CRUNCH! SNAP! RIIIP!

Chris was no more. The vines made quick work of him, tearing apart his body, shredding up his organs and scattering his bloody remains across the city.

"Well, my work here is done." Yuuka smiled as a gap opened up behind her and she went inside, returning back to Gensoukyou.

THE END.
The end of Chris's Reign over CWCville and Yuuka's victory.
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Rage432 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
Acutally, I'm working on a few alternate endings.
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FrostytheRipper Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
uhh, the pacing seems a bit hectic, and cliches like the whole "single tear" thing tend to detract more from the work then they add.

i've been following this since the beginning, and it feels like you tried to rush through the ending. other then that i can't say i didn't enjoy this.
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